Hey all!I’m back with my first set of tankas, titled “Butterflies and Asters”. Enjoy!
Larvae hatch from eggs,
Caterpillars weave cocoons,
The cycle of life;
Complete when butterflies soar,
Nature’s beauty symbolised;
Asters in full bloom,
Extend their hands in welcome,
Nature’s attendants,
Their services requited
With a brew of fantasy.
-The Forgers of Fantasy
This has been penned for the Tanka Tuesday challenge hosted today. You can access it at https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/11/16/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-252-photoprompt/ .
The Tanka:
The tanka is a thirty-one-syllable poem, traditionally written in a single unbroken line. A form of waka, Japanese song or verse, tanka translates as “short song,” and is better known in its five-line, 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count form.
For more such poems,refer The Forgers of Fantasy
“a brew of fantasy” is what it’s like, perfectly put! With flowers and butterflies flitting and feeding, it is like a fantasy world.
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❤ Lisa thanks! ❤
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Lovely, Veera! 🙂
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Thanks Harmony! ❤ 🙂
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Welcome! I enjoyed your double tanka poems. It’s great to see you here. ❤
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Thank you very much!I really appreciate it .
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“a brew of fantasy”, lends magic to your piece. I love the title!
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❤ Thanks, Eugi! ❤
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Most welcome! 😊
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beautiful with two stunning lines: ‘a flamboyant piece of art’ and the magical ‘brew of fantasy’ —
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❤ Thanks a lot! ❤
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you’re welcome 🙂
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Sing-song metaphors. An exquisite tanka!
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Thank you very much! Welcome to my blog 🙂
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