
Hey all! I’m back with my next quadrille,in the form of a cadralor. Enjoy!
Winter arriving,
People relish watching snow
Pounding on rooftops.
Glacial weather,
Shivering families seek
Fireplaces cozy.
The rich reveling,
Within the warmth of houses,
Observing Christmas.
The poor lie listless,
Starving,on sidewalks,begging
For morsels of food.
Winters’ happiness
Is happiness eternal
If universal.
-The Forgers of Fantasy
P.S: This has been penned for DVerse, where poets were asked to write quadrilles including any form of the word “Shiver”. You can access the prompt at https://dversepoets.com/2022/01/24/quadrille-144-shivering/ .
For more such poems,refer The Forgers of Fantasy
Oh, so clever, another stunning way to see Winter, as a revealer of social and economic classes. 👏
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❤ Thank you very much,my friend! ❤
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Most welcome ❤
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Such wise words in the last stanza! Wonderfully done.
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❤ Thanks a lot! ❤
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Stunning statement….and more than sad…the xontrast between the two, rich and poor was so poignent, and when you say poor here, you are really saying it…poetry with such social conscience is so much more than just the beauty of its words…
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❤ My friend,honestly,this comment is way more than kind…thank you very much for your wonderful words! ❤ 😍
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great wisdom here, your words and the photo took me there … is it your shot?
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❤ Nah,I took it from the web…thanks a lot! And welcome to my blog.. ❤
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well picked then
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Powerful writing and equally powerful imagery. 💗
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❤ Thanks a lot! Welcome to my blog 🙂 ❤
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So much to think about in this. Well done.
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A well-written poem of contrasts. Winter is very different for those with means and for those without.
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❤ Thanks a lot! Btw,me and David have finished our Hyakuin collab,you can check it out if you want! 😉 ❤
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You’re welcome. I’ll try to when I get a chance.
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Winter can be so different depending on perspective… made me think of the little matchstick girl
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❤ Oh yessss,the one from The Happy Prince? ❤
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I love the message here: we must strive to bring happiness to all, and not forget those in need!
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❤ Indeed we should! Thanks a lot! ❤
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