
Hey all! I’m back with my next quadrille.Enjoy!
Oh hello,Mr. Nibbler!
What have we today?
You trying to steal savories
Or nibble away at my cakes?
I’d love to feed you
Some special treats,
If only there were any
Rendered a meal complete.
My breakfast,I present,
I hope you’re content.
-The Forgers of Fantasy
I wrote this a bit while back,relating vaguely to some kids I had encountered once while travelling, who simply wouldn’t stop asking their mother for more and more toys and sweets,and ended up almost exhausting her money. When I thought of it again, I found it funny that I too,had once done the same, and I’m glad I’ve grown up!
P.S: This has been penned for DVerse, where poets were asked to write quadrilles using any form of the word nibble. You can access the prompt at https://dversepoets.com/2022/02/07/quadrille-145/ .
For more such poems, refer The Forgers of Fantasy
I hope you’re content.
I highly doubt that!!π π
Well penned, Veeraβ€β€
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πStay tuned for part 2!π
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ππsure, sure!
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I think you are too nice to the mouse! Lovely verse with rhyme that really clicks…well done!
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β€ I can sympathise with the mother on that one.. π I think I'll write a part 2 as well! β€
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That Mr. Nibbler will come back and save you one day. With a heart like yours, he’s bound to return the favor. Thanks for sharing.
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β€ I sure hope so,given that I still feed him generously! β€
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A wonderful poem. You sure know how to write fantasy poems.
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β€ Thank you very much,my friend! β€
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You’re so much welcome, dear β€ π·
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It’s funny how we look back and see things so differently. Hope Mr. Nibble enjoyed! π
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β€ Oh yes I agree! β€
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I wouldn’t offer my food for a mouse… soon he will be back with all his relatives.
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β€ It was that,or my larder being emptied. β€
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yes we like to spoil others but sometimes its a wiser lesson to leave them wanting π Nice verse and insight!
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β€ Indeed,we do! β€
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That’s such a sweet one, Veera. π
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β€ I might even write a second part π β€
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Waiting eagerly. π
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That’s one lucky mouse.
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β€ And that's one unlucky man! β€
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