
Hey all!I’m back with my first cleave poem, in the form of two katautas. I took inspiration from David’s(The Skeptic’s Kaddish) superb cleave poems to pen one of my own!
Papa once professed, One marv’lous morning,
We needn’t proceed to pursue Pinnacle of perfection,
Utopias unreal; Ne’er to grace glorious earth.
-The Forgers of Fantasy
Cleave poem:
Essentially,a cleave poem consists of two poems on the left and right, which,if read together should become a poem too.
For more such poems,refer The Forgers of Fantasy
My first time seeing this form, and I think you executed it perfectly! Congratulations:)
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❤ Thanks a lot! I actually learnt it from reading David's cleave poems,they're awesome! ❤
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🙌🏼💕beautiful!!
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indeed! very beautiful ❤
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😍David😍
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❤ Riya ❤
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Beautiful pieces ❤
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❤ Thanks a lot,my friend! ❤
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Most welcome 😘
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Wowww❤❤
Wonderful!!
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❤ Aayushi,thanks a lot! ❤
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Nice one!
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❤ Thanks a lot! ❤
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You are welcome. 😊
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Nice one🙂.my pa says that too🙂
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❤ Kunjal ❤
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