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The house was deserted,
Housing no-one but me,
I lay on my bed forging
Fantastical poetry.
My body forced me back
When I tried to rise,
As if,it would result
In an excruciating demise.
Then again,I thought,
Eventually,all shall meet death.
What point be there,in fearing
Our last,wheezing breath?
Some say the dead journey
Towards heaven,or hell.
The wicked shall suffer,
While the good revel.
Some say our souls
Shall vanish into darkness,
The life snatched by death
Shall become nothingness.
Some say that Death is
An unavoidable path,
Once caught in its noose,
You shall have to depart.
I lay in bed thinking
About that golden paradise,
How Buddha preached that death
Isn’t mourned by the wise.
How countless people wonder
What lies at the other end,
Mythical mysteries untold,
Or malicious,diabolical fiends.
I envisaged warriors guarding
The gateways to Heaven,
Greeted with pleasant smiles
Souls formerly good men.
Perhaps,one day,I’d know,
I comforted my curiosity,
One day,it’ll be my turn,
As from life,I’ll be relieved.
And so I lay in bed thinking,
As dawned daybreak.
By sunset at dusk,
I was no more awake.
The Forgers of Fantasy
P.S: This has been penned for DVerse, where poets were asked to take on a Jim Harrison challenge,and use any of the 8 lines given in the prompt,adapted from some of his works, as an epigraph for a poem. You can access the prompt at https://dversepoets.com/2022/01/25/poetics-songs-of-unreason/ . The line I chose was:
““I don’t know what happens after death but I’ll have to chance it.”- Desert Snow, Jim Harrison“.
For more such poems,refer The Forgers of Fantasy
very very nice ending there, Veera!
❤
David
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🤗David,I’m glad you enjoyed!🤗
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Slo-mo claps👏👏 for this beauty you have typed 🤍
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🙌Riya🙌
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Beautifully penned, your musing makes the reader wonder too.
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❤ Thank you very much! ❤
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Thanks for sharing. Nice. 👏
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❤ Thank you so much! Welcome to my blog..(I should have said that two posts ago,sorry! 😉 ) ❤
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unique take🙂
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❤ Kunjal,Khushi ❤
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Oooh Veera, you were braver than I am, in tackling that prompt! And I loooove your graphic of the Grim Reaper. Actually it makes me laugh, because my ex-partner has a scythe, indeed many scythes, for cutting wildflower meadows with… a gentle and sharp-edged occupation, but I’ll be content, like you, in harvesting words. And I hope your body lets you dance, a little or a lot, in this life,
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❤ Thank you very much! Yes, I think my body will let me dance a lot in this life,as I've got the whole of it ahead of me 😉 And welcome to my blog! ❤
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Very wise words,
“Perhaps,one day,I’d know,
I comforted my curiosity,
One day,it’ll be my turn,
As from life,I’ll be relieved”
Wonderfully written, Veera. ❤️
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❤ Thank you very much!( btw,my hyakuin collab with david is complete! You can check it out if you want 🙂 ) ❤
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I wonder too, but in the end, you can do nothing but your best as you’re living.
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❤ Dead men tell no tales! 😉 ❤
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The poem wandered off into a deep sleep…a happy compromise…….a strongly philosophical take…..
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❤ Thanks so much! ❤
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I really like this rhythmic take, you did a more personal meander that resonates deeply!
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❤ Thank you very much! ❤
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Angels must carry us gently, peacefully as we make the journey …..
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❤ Indeed! Welcome to my blog! (I should have said that 3-4 posts ago,sorry! 🙂 ) ❤
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I love the twist at the end, Veera – gave me the shivers!
‘Buddha preached that death
Isn’t mourned by the wise.’
I think I am reaching a point where I understand this teaching.
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❤ That teaching was part of an English lesson titled "The Sermon at Benares",and as the teacher had completed it recently, it was still fresh on my mind when I wrote it!
Thanks a lot! ❤
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