
A kyrielle:
I dream of delightful mornings,
I dream of aromas fragrant,
I dream of birds warbling verses,
Greeting a sunrise radiant.
I remember colossal cornfields
I remember sparrows rampant,
I remember robins dancing,
Greeting a sunrise radiant.
I dream of dawns magnificent,
I dream of red skies flamboyant,
I dream of the descending moon
Greeting a sunrise radiant.
I remember waking up quick,
To admire horizons vibrant,
I remember the cock’s cackle
Greeting a sunrise radiant.
-The Forgers of Fantasy
This has been penned for DVerse, where poets were asked to pen poems with the poetic device anaphora, using any of a set of given words. I chose the words “remember” and “dream”.
The full list of words? Here!
1.Dream
2.Remember
3.Eat
4.Choose
5.Love
6.Fear
7.Hope
8.Paint
9.Lose
You can access the prompt at https://dversepoets.com/2022/04/05/a-little-repetition/
A’ight, this is also my submission for the next DVerse prompt as well(the current, as I type this), where poets were asked to pen :
1.A poem evoking daybreak/greeting the dawn,
(OR)
2.A poem about lovers parting at dawn.
You can access the prompt at https://dversepoets.com/2022/04/07/mtb-morning-has-broken/
For more such poems,refer The Forgers of Fantasy
Oh i luv the musicality of this one. Bravo!!!
Much💜love
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I love the repetition here, it works so well in the form you’ve chosen. And it’s such a joyful poem.
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lovely
could you memorise the rules of kyrielle?😃
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Kunjal, of course you can memorise the rules of a kyrielle 😉 🙃
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remind**
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i wrote memorize by accident
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Either turn off autocorrect,or focus on what you’re typing 😌
Rules: 1. Each line should have 8 syllables
2. The stanzas should be 4 lined
3. A line should repeat in each stanza
4. There should be a minimum of 3 such stanzas for a kyrielle
🙂
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This is lovely … dreams and memories to fuel our fire.
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Well done!. Your repetition works very well.
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Delightful and radiant. Draws my heart close to wonderful moments and good memories of such. Amazing!
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Welcome 💖
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Nice blending of forms and repetition. A delightful poem appealing to all the senses.
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Such a lovely way to wake up…
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❤ It indeed is! ❤
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This is so lovely, Veera! ❤️
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My pleasure.
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I love the sun streaming through a cornfield in your jubilant morning song!
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My pleasure!
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a lovely litany to the dawn with that Kyrielle
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Nice work with all of these prompts, Veera! I love ‘I remember the cock’s cackle’ – what a fun line!
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❤ Thanks a lot! ❤
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