Hey all! I’m back with my first couple of katuatas. Enjoy!
Atop tallest peak,
Admiring not skies above,
Absorbed in beauty below.
What humility!
Furious firestorms within
Honor humble flames without.
P.S: This has been penned for the What Do You See prompt, #WDYS , where poets were asked to write what they saw in the photo in question(given above). You can access the prompt at https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2022/01/17/what-do-you-see-117-january-17-2022/ .
Katuata:
A katuata is a Japanese form of poetry consisting of 3 lines, with the syllable limit 5-7-7.
For more such poems,refer The Forgers of Fantasy
Thanks for joining in! This is an unusual take. I enjoyed reading your poems.
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❤ I tried something different ❤
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It’s great.
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Beautiful poem! Thanks for joining in
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❤ Thanks a lot! ❤
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You’re welcome
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Beautifully done!
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❤ Thank you,my friend! ❤
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My pleasure❤️
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This is a new form for me! Well done 🙂
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❤ David, I'm sure you'll enjoy working with it. ❤
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Wonderful take, Veera.
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❤ Thanks a lot! ❤
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You are welcome.
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